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Personification of the Weather

The weather is personified throughout to make it sound menacing and deadly. This also characterises the weather as the real enemy of the soldiers. Here are some examples of personification of the weather:

“Our brains ache in the merciless iced east winds that knive us”

“Our brains ache in the merciless iced east winds that knive us”

  • The sibilance also highlights the intensity of the pain and the brutality of the weather.
“Less deadly than the air that shudders black with snow”

“Less deadly than the air that shudders black with snow”

  • Nature is presented as more damaging and deadly than the bullets.
“Pale flakes with fingering stealth come feeling for our faces”

“Pale flakes with fingering stealth come feeling for our faces”

  • The consonance (repetition of consonant sounds) here reflects the ferocity of the weather.

Dawn and Soldiers

Dawn is personified in these lines: “Dawn amassing in the East her melancholy army / Attacks once more in ranks on shivering ranks of grey.” These lines are important. Here's an analysis:

Contradiction

Contradiction

  • Dawn, usually associated with ideas of light and hope, is here hostile and brings even more suffering.
Colour imagery

Colour imagery

  • The colour imagery “grey” conveys ideas of despair and boredom.
Military vocabulary

Military vocabulary

  • “Ranks” is a military term and is repeated, reminding the reader that the weather is the soldiers’ enemy.
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