2.1.5
Pathetic Fallacy
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Pathetic Fallacy
Pathetic fallacy is when a writer gives human emotions to things that are not human, such as objects, animals or, most commonly, the weather.

Furious winds
- The furious winds blew across the plains.
- In this phrase, you are creating an image of the wind feeling fury. This is pathetic fallacy because fury is a human emotion and wind cannot actually feel any sort of emotion.
- By giving the wind a human emotion, it helps the reader to visualise the severity of its anger.
- The idea of the wind being able to feel this emotion also humanises it and suggests that it has a consciousness.

Sea raged
- She balled her fists in anger as the sea raged behind her.
- In this phrase, you are creating an image of the sea feeling rage. This is pathetic fallacy because rage is a human emotion and sea cannot actually feel any sort of emotion.
- By giving the sea a human emotion, it helps the reader to visualise the severity of the rage – it almost seems ready to attack.
- The anger of the character is also highlighted and then emphasised because the sea is echoing her feelings as well.

Sad clouds
- Mud-coloured clouds drooped sadly over the muddy streets as the criminal continued to elude them.
- This is pathetic fallacy because sadness is a human emotion and clouds cannot actually feel any sort of emotion.
- By giving the clouds a human emotion, it helps the reader to visualise the thick, opaque clouds blocking our view.
- The idea of the clouds feeling sad paints a picture of them hanging low, moving slowly, and obscuring everything.
Tips for Using Pathetic Fallacy
Pathetic fallacy is when a writer gives human emotions to things that are not human, such as objects, animals or, most commonly, the weather.

Alternative use
- Pathetic fallacy can also be used when the weather echoes human emotions (e.g. when something sad happens, it is raining).
- This is a form of personification but refers purely to giving human emotions to inhuman things.
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Focus on the weather
- Focus on making the weather feel something.

Consider the mood
- Be careful with how you use the pathetic fallacy – your choice of emotion will either emphasise the mood you want to create or will change it completely.

Echo characters' emotions
- Pathetic fallacy can be used to set the scene, reinforce a feeling, or foreshadow something happening in the future.
- If you want to really emphasise the effect, have the weather echo an emotion from a character.

Choose vocabulary carefully
- Your choice of vocabulary is vital in creating your language devices.
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1Key Terms
1.1Key Terms
2Language Devices
3Writing Structure
4Section B: Reading & Writing
4.1Writing Formats
4.2Writing to...
4.2.1Writing to Inform4.2.2Writing to Inform - Example4.2.3Writing to Explain4.2.4Writing to Explain - Example4.2.5Writing to Persuade4.2.6Writing to Persuade - Example4.2.7Writing to Argue4.2.8Writing to Argue - Example4.2.9Writing to Persuade vs Writing to Argue4.2.10Writing to Advise4.2.11Writing to Advise - Example4.2.12End of Topic Test - Writing to...
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