8.2.1
Narrative Perspective
Different Narrative Perspectives in Atonement
Different Narrative Perspectives in Atonement
McEwan plays with the idea of perspective throughout Atonement. We see events from different perspectives, particularly in Part One, and at times see the same event from different points of view.
Different perspectives on events
Different perspectives on events
- Seeing the same event from different points of view forces the reader to piece together the ‘truth’ from different perspectives which are often in conflict with each other because characters interpret these events very differently.
- The reader is almost placed in the role of detective, continually re-evaluating the available evidence to create a coherent and truthful version of events.
Emily: "all knowing"
Emily: "all knowing"
- The reader’s task is complicated by the fact that perspective often plays tricks on us and a character’s understanding of events may be deeply flawed.
- E.g. in Chapter 6, Emily Tallis lies in bed and tries to recreate the world around her from interpreting the noises she hears in various rooms and corridors in the house. Emily sees herself as possessing a “sixth sense” which makes her “all-knowing” about the comings and goings in the household: “She lay in the dark and knew everything” (p66).
Emily's misinterpretations
Emily's misinterpretations
- However, McEwan shows us the limits of Emily’s perspective and just how mistaken her perception is – she misreads Lola’s squeal of laughter heard from the library as perfectly innocent and then badly misjudges the character of Paul Marshall, speculating that he “may not be such a bad sort” (p67).
- Emily misinterprets the world around her and does not see the danger that Marshall poses.
Events from Different Points of View in Atonement
Events from Different Points of View in Atonement
We see the fountain scene from Cecilia and Briony's points of view and the library scene from Briony and Robbie's points of view.
Fountain scene: Cecilia & Briony
Fountain scene: Cecilia & Briony
- In Chapters 2 and 3, we see the same event (the scene by the fountain) from two different points of view – Cecilia’s and then Briony’s. When this scene is ‘replayed’ in Chapter 3, Briony is unable to hear the conversation between Cecilia and Robbie and so invents a storyline which makes sense to her.
Briony's melodramatic narrative
Briony's melodramatic narrative
- However, Briony’s version of the scene is full of melodrama, involving a proposal of marriage and the threat of blackmail, just like the stories she has written.
- This distorted version of reality will eventually lead to Robbie’s arrest the following morning.
Robbie's perspective (Chapter 8)
Robbie's perspective (Chapter 8)
- To add to the complexity, we revisit the scene by the fountain in Chapter 8, this time from Robbie’s perspective as he puzzles over Cecilia’s behaviour. Robbie comes up with his own version of events, one in which Cecilia steps into the fountain to embarrass him: “Of course. He saw it clearly now. The idea was to humiliate him.” Each new perspective adds a new layer of understanding to our understanding of events.
Briony's perspective: library
Briony's perspective: library
- We again see different perspectives of the same event in Chapters 10 and 11 when Cecilia and Robbie making love in the library is seen from Briony’s, and then Robbie’s point of view.
- Briony’s misreading of what she has witnessed is seen in her childish perception of it as “an attack, a hand-to-hand fight” (p123) because of the extremity of Robbie’s and Cecilia’s passion: (“He had pushed his body… gripping her hair… had trapped her”). This will lead Briony and Lola to view Robbie as a “maniac” or “monster” when they read his obscene words to Cecilia.
Briony's perspective on the search
Briony's perspective on the search
- Briony’s perspective is also seen as flawed when she is out searching for the twins. Alone and surrounded by darkness, her imagination begins to play tricks on her, with the narrative explicitly stating that she is vulnerable to “some trick of darkness or perspective” (p164).
Focalisation Through Robbie & Briony's Narrative
Focalisation Through Robbie & Briony's Narrative
Part Two is focalised through Robbie so that we see the horrors of war from his perspective. The initials and date at the end of Part Three are significance.
Focalising as Robbie
Focalising as Robbie
- Part Two is focalised through Robbie so that we see the horrors of war from his perspective.
- The narrative shows Robbie to be suffering from trauma, troubled by the memories of atrocities he has witnessed and we see his exhaustion when the narrative emphasises each individual step he takes: “He walked / across / the land / until / he came / to the sea” (p219).
- The narrative begins to resemble a stream of consciousness in the closing pages of this section as Robbie’s infected wound causes him to become feverish.
Significance of initials & date
Significance of initials & date
- At the end of Part Three, the initials and date indicate that it has been written by an older Briony, forcing us to re-evaluate everything we have just read.
- The revelation in Part Four that the reunion in Part Three did not happen and that Robbie in fact died in Dunkirk further disorientates the reader. We are confronted with the uncomfortable fact that Briony, like “God”, has the power to reshape reality as she pleases.
1Introduction to Atonement
1.1Introduction & Background to Atonement
1.2Focus of Your Exam: Crime Texts
2Chapter Summaries & Analysis: Part One
2.6Chapter 6
2.10Chapter 10
2.11Chapter 11
2.12Chapter 12
2.13Chapter 13
2.14Chapter 14
3Chapter Summaries & Analysis: Part Two
3.1Pages 191-201: To the Farmhouse
3.2Pages 202-213: The Night in the Barn
3.3Pages 214-226: The Attack
3.4Pages 226-234: Robbie's Reflections
3.5Pages 234-246: To the Bridge over the Canal
3.6Pages 246-254: Arrival at Dunkirk
3.7Pages 254-265: To the Cellar
4Chapter Summaries & Analysis: Part Three
4.1Pages 269-277: London, 1940
4.2Pages 277-286: Briony as Writer
4.3Pages 287-315: Victims of War
4.4Pages 315-327: Lola & Paul Marshall’s Wedding
4.5Pages 328-349: The Visit
5Chapter Summaries & Analysis: Part Four
5.1Epilogue: London, 1999 - Pages 353-371
6Key Character Profiles
6.1Briony Tallis
6.2Robbie Turner
6.3Cecilia Tallis
6.5Paul Marshall
6.6Emily Tallis
7Key Themes
7.1Introduction to Crime Texts
7.2Crimes in Atonement
7.3Criminals in Atonement
7.4Victims in Atonement
7.5Detection in Atonement
7.6Settings in Atonement
7.7Guilt & Punishment in Atonement
8Writing Techniques
9Context
9.1Historical Context
9.2Social Context
9.3Literary Context
10Critical Debates
10.1Marxist Literary Criticism
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1Introduction to Atonement
1.1Introduction & Background to Atonement
1.2Focus of Your Exam: Crime Texts
2Chapter Summaries & Analysis: Part One
2.6Chapter 6
2.10Chapter 10
2.11Chapter 11
2.12Chapter 12
2.13Chapter 13
2.14Chapter 14
3Chapter Summaries & Analysis: Part Two
3.1Pages 191-201: To the Farmhouse
3.2Pages 202-213: The Night in the Barn
3.3Pages 214-226: The Attack
3.4Pages 226-234: Robbie's Reflections
3.5Pages 234-246: To the Bridge over the Canal
3.6Pages 246-254: Arrival at Dunkirk
3.7Pages 254-265: To the Cellar
4Chapter Summaries & Analysis: Part Three
4.1Pages 269-277: London, 1940
4.2Pages 277-286: Briony as Writer
4.3Pages 287-315: Victims of War
4.4Pages 315-327: Lola & Paul Marshall’s Wedding
4.5Pages 328-349: The Visit
5Chapter Summaries & Analysis: Part Four
5.1Epilogue: London, 1999 - Pages 353-371
6Key Character Profiles
6.1Briony Tallis
6.2Robbie Turner
6.3Cecilia Tallis
6.5Paul Marshall
6.6Emily Tallis
7Key Themes
7.1Introduction to Crime Texts
7.2Crimes in Atonement
7.3Criminals in Atonement
7.4Victims in Atonement
7.5Detection in Atonement
7.6Settings in Atonement
7.7Guilt & Punishment in Atonement
8Writing Techniques
9Context
9.1Historical Context
9.2Social Context
9.3Literary Context
10Critical Debates
10.1Marxist Literary Criticism
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