8.1.3

Manipulation of Time

Test yourself

Time Structure: Shifting Back in Time in Atonement

One of the most important structural features in the novel is the way in which McEwan manipulates readers’ responses through his use of subtle shifts backwards and forwards in time.

Illustrative background for Time setting of Part OneIllustrative background for Time setting of Part One ?? "content

Time setting of Part One

  • Part One, which takes up over half of Atonement, tells the story of a single day, night and following morning in the summer of 1935. Events are largely told in a chronological sequence which ends with Robbie’s arrest the morning after the sexual assault on Lola.
  • However, McEwan’s narrative in Part One has a much more complex structure than it may first seem to.
Illustrative background for Time shift: Chapter 2-3Illustrative background for Time shift: Chapter 2-3 ?? "content

Time shift: Chapter 2-3

  • McEwan makes particular use of shifts backwards in time in Part One. Perhaps the most important example of this is the time shift between the end of Chapter 2 and Chapter 3.
  • In Chapter 2, we see Cecilia and Robbie’s encounter at the fountain, focalized through Cecilia’s perspective, in which the vase is broken and Cecilia takes off her blouse and skirt to step into the fountain and retrieve the broken pieces.
Illustrative background for Briony's perspective: fountain sceneIllustrative background for Briony's perspective: fountain scene ?? "content

Briony's perspective: fountain scene

  • However, McEwan takes us back in time at the beginning of Chapter 3 and we end up seeing the same scene replayed, with the crucial difference that we now see events from Briony’s perspective.
  • This is significant because we see how Briony misinterprets the scene, the first of several mis-readings by her which will eventually result in tragedy.
Illustrative background for Irony: Briony's misinterpretationIllustrative background for Irony: Briony's misinterpretation ?? "content

Irony: Briony's misinterpretation

  • This creates a layer of irony as we as readers know that Briony is mistaken, having witnessed the scene for ourselves in Chapter 2.
  • This also creates some distance between ourselves and the 13-year-old Briony as we discover that she is not yet able to understand the behaviour of the adults around her.

Time Structure: Shifting Forward in Time in Atonement

McEwan also uses shifts forward in time for specific effects. These often take the form of an authorial intrusion where the omniscient narrator provides us with some information about the future.

Illustrative background for First authorial intrusionIllustrative background for First authorial intrusion ?? "content

First authorial intrusion

  • The first time we see this is in Chapter 1 when the narrative informs us that Briony’s play will not make it to performance (at least not for when it was intended, later that day): “Briony was hardly to know it then, but this was the project’s highest form of fulfilment”.
    • This is the first example of McEwan breaking the chronological sequence of the novel’s narrative, in this case to foreshadow some disruption to Briony’s plans.
Illustrative background for Time shifts to create suspenseIllustrative background for Time shifts to create suspense ?? "content

Time shifts to create suspense

  • McEwan also uses these shifts forward in time to create suspense.
  • Chapter 13 (the chapter in which Lola is sexually assaulted) begins with the tantalising opening, “Within the half-hour Briony would commit her crime” (p156), which immediately creates an atmosphere of mystery and foreboding. We do not know as yet what Briony’s “crime” will be, and as she walks through the darkness in a state of heightened fear and excitement, tension steadily builds.
Illustrative background for Briony sticking to eventsIllustrative background for Briony sticking to events ?? "content

Briony sticking to events

  • After Briony discovers Lola and insists that it was Robbie that she had seen run away, there is another shift forward in time where Briony recounts how she sticks to this version of events in “the weeks and months to come” (p167).
  • Readers may react to this in different ways. Some may be horrified at Briony’s maintaining a lie for so long. But others may feel sympathy for a 13-year-old child who suddenly has this responsibility thrust upon her.
Illustrative background for Time shits between partsIllustrative background for Time shits between parts ?? "content

Time shits between parts

  • McEwan also uses abrupt time shifts between different parts of the novel.
  • When Part Two opens, we have no idea where we are in time or place. The references to rifles and officers hint at a war-time setting but then we are presented with the surreal image of “a leg in a tree” (p192).
  • The shock of this image may disorientate readers as well as bringing them unexpectedly face to face with one of the “horrors” mentioned in the opening sentence.

Jump to other topics

1Introduction to Atonement

2Chapter Summaries & Analysis: Part One

3Chapter Summaries & Analysis: Part Two

4Chapter Summaries & Analysis: Part Three

5Chapter Summaries & Analysis: Part Four

5.1Epilogue: London, 1999 - Pages 353-371

6Key Character Profiles

7Key Themes

8Writing Techniques

9Context

10Critical Debates

Go student ad image

Unlock your full potential with GoStudent tutoring

  • Affordable 1:1 tutoring from the comfort of your home

  • Tutors are matched to your specific learning needs

  • 30+ school subjects covered

Book a free trial lesson