8.1.3
Manipulation of Time
Time Structure: Shifting Back in Time in Atonement
Time Structure: Shifting Back in Time in Atonement
One of the most important structural features in the novel is the way in which McEwan manipulates readers’ responses through his use of subtle shifts backwards and forwards in time.
Time setting of Part One
Time setting of Part One
- Part One, which takes up over half of Atonement, tells the story of a single day, night and following morning in the summer of 1935. Events are largely told in a chronological sequence which ends with Robbie’s arrest the morning after the sexual assault on Lola.
- However, McEwan’s narrative in Part One has a much more complex structure than it may first seem to.
Time shift: Chapter 2-3
Time shift: Chapter 2-3
- McEwan makes particular use of shifts backwards in time in Part One. Perhaps the most important example of this is the time shift between the end of Chapter 2 and Chapter 3.
- In Chapter 2, we see Cecilia and Robbie’s encounter at the fountain, focalized through Cecilia’s perspective, in which the vase is broken and Cecilia takes off her blouse and skirt to step into the fountain and retrieve the broken pieces.
Briony's perspective: fountain scene
Briony's perspective: fountain scene
- However, McEwan takes us back in time at the beginning of Chapter 3 and we end up seeing the same scene replayed, with the crucial difference that we now see events from Briony’s perspective.
- This is significant because we see how Briony misinterprets the scene, the first of several mis-readings by her which will eventually result in tragedy.
Irony: Briony's misinterpretation
Irony: Briony's misinterpretation
- This creates a layer of irony as we as readers know that Briony is mistaken, having witnessed the scene for ourselves in Chapter 2.
- This also creates some distance between ourselves and the 13-year-old Briony as we discover that she is not yet able to understand the behaviour of the adults around her.
Time Structure: Shifting Forward in Time in Atonement
Time Structure: Shifting Forward in Time in Atonement
McEwan also uses shifts forward in time for specific effects. These often take the form of an authorial intrusion where the omniscient narrator provides us with some information about the future.
Time shifts to create suspense
Time shifts to create suspense
- McEwan also uses these shifts forward in time to create suspense.
- Chapter 13 (the chapter in which Lola is sexually assaulted) begins with the tantalising opening, “Within the half-hour Briony would commit her crime” (p156), which immediately creates an atmosphere of mystery and foreboding. We do not know as yet what Briony’s “crime” will be, and as she walks through the darkness in a state of heightened fear and excitement, tension steadily builds.
Briony sticking to events
Briony sticking to events
- After Briony discovers Lola and insists that it was Robbie that she had seen run away, there is another shift forward in time where Briony recounts how she sticks to this version of events in “the weeks and months to come” (p167).
- Readers may react to this in different ways. Some may be horrified at Briony’s maintaining a lie for so long. But others may feel sympathy for a 13-year-old child who suddenly has this responsibility thrust upon her.
Time shits between parts
Time shits between parts
- McEwan also uses abrupt time shifts between different parts of the novel.
- When Part Two opens, we have no idea where we are in time or place. The references to rifles and officers hint at a war-time setting but then we are presented with the surreal image of “a leg in a tree” (p192).
- The shock of this image may disorientate readers as well as bringing them unexpectedly face to face with one of the “horrors” mentioned in the opening sentence.
1Introduction to Atonement
1.1Introduction & Background to Atonement
1.2Focus of Your Exam: Crime Texts
2Chapter Summaries & Analysis: Part One
2.6Chapter 6
2.10Chapter 10
2.11Chapter 11
2.12Chapter 12
2.13Chapter 13
2.14Chapter 14
3Chapter Summaries & Analysis: Part Two
3.1Pages 191-201: To the Farmhouse
3.2Pages 202-213: The Night in the Barn
3.3Pages 214-226: The Attack
3.4Pages 226-234: Robbie's Reflections
3.5Pages 234-246: To the Bridge over the Canal
3.6Pages 246-254: Arrival at Dunkirk
3.7Pages 254-265: To the Cellar
4Chapter Summaries & Analysis: Part Three
4.1Pages 269-277: London, 1940
4.2Pages 277-286: Briony as Writer
4.3Pages 287-315: Victims of War
4.4Pages 315-327: Lola & Paul Marshall’s Wedding
4.5Pages 328-349: The Visit
5Chapter Summaries & Analysis: Part Four
5.1Epilogue: London, 1999 - Pages 353-371
6Key Character Profiles
6.1Briony Tallis
6.2Robbie Turner
6.3Cecilia Tallis
6.5Paul Marshall
6.6Emily Tallis
7Key Themes
7.1Introduction to Crime Texts
7.2Crimes in Atonement
7.3Criminals in Atonement
7.4Victims in Atonement
7.5Detection in Atonement
7.6Settings in Atonement
7.7Guilt & Punishment in Atonement
8Writing Techniques
9Context
9.1Historical Context
9.2Social Context
9.3Literary Context
10Critical Debates
10.1Marxist Literary Criticism
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1Introduction to Atonement
1.1Introduction & Background to Atonement
1.2Focus of Your Exam: Crime Texts
2Chapter Summaries & Analysis: Part One
2.6Chapter 6
2.10Chapter 10
2.11Chapter 11
2.12Chapter 12
2.13Chapter 13
2.14Chapter 14
3Chapter Summaries & Analysis: Part Two
3.1Pages 191-201: To the Farmhouse
3.2Pages 202-213: The Night in the Barn
3.3Pages 214-226: The Attack
3.4Pages 226-234: Robbie's Reflections
3.5Pages 234-246: To the Bridge over the Canal
3.6Pages 246-254: Arrival at Dunkirk
3.7Pages 254-265: To the Cellar
4Chapter Summaries & Analysis: Part Three
4.1Pages 269-277: London, 1940
4.2Pages 277-286: Briony as Writer
4.3Pages 287-315: Victims of War
4.4Pages 315-327: Lola & Paul Marshall’s Wedding
4.5Pages 328-349: The Visit
5Chapter Summaries & Analysis: Part Four
5.1Epilogue: London, 1999 - Pages 353-371
6Key Character Profiles
6.1Briony Tallis
6.2Robbie Turner
6.3Cecilia Tallis
6.5Paul Marshall
6.6Emily Tallis
7Key Themes
7.1Introduction to Crime Texts
7.2Crimes in Atonement
7.3Criminals in Atonement
7.4Victims in Atonement
7.5Detection in Atonement
7.6Settings in Atonement
7.7Guilt & Punishment in Atonement
8Writing Techniques
9Context
9.1Historical Context
9.2Social Context
9.3Literary Context
10Critical Debates
10.1Marxist Literary Criticism
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