Repetition
English Language: Edexcel IGCSE - Specification B, topic 4.3.5
Repetition
Repetition is when the same words or phrases are written multiple times (in a sentence or a whole text) to make an idea more memorable or clearer. Repetition can also be used to emphasise an important idea in a text.
Repetition of 'silent/silence'
- The silence made her shiver – the silent wind, the silent waves, and his silent breathing.
- Repetition of ‘silent’ emphasises the quietness the character is experiencing.
- The repeated ‘silent’ also creates a spooky, eerie atmosphere and alters the mood of the piece.
- By choosing to repeat this particular part, we have helped to build tension, which leaves a reader wondering what will happen next.
Repetition of 'we will'
- We will work hard and we will win!
- Repetition of ‘we’ emphasises the idea that the writer/speaker and the reader/audience will be working together to achieve a common goal.
- Repetition of ‘will’ emphasises the determination behind the goal – it is guaranteed that this goal will be achieved, and the writer is so confident in this that they have repeated it.
- By choosing to repeat this particular part, we have helped to build a relationship between the writer and the reader.
Repetition of 'vital'
- Revision is vital for reminding yourself about key facts, vital in developing your understanding of each topic, and vital to improving your subject knowledge.
- Repetition of ‘vital’ emphasises the importance of the initial idea – the revision.
- The repeated ‘vital’ leaves no room for argument or doubt – the writer gives the clear impression that revision is the key to success here.
Tips for Using Repetition
Repetition is when the same words or phrases are written multiple times (in a sentence or a whole text) to make an idea more memorable or clearer. Repetition can also be used to emphasise an important idea in a text.
Don't over-repeat words
- Don’t over-repeat the words you have chosen to repeat – you risk making your writing too repetitive and boring.
Only repeat important words
- Only repeat words you think are important and should be emphasised. In some cases, repetition is not necessary – instead, vary your vocabulary.
Choose vocabulary carefully
- Your choice of vocabulary is vital in creating your language devices effectively.
Test yourself on Repetition
Which phrases use repetition?
Which word is repeated in this phrase?
Can't you see how hard I am trying? Can't we give this another go?What should you NOT do when using repetition?
Is this a good example of repetition?
Henry was a good boy. Henry had nice clothes. Henry was a pleasant singer. Henry enjoyed dancingWhat could we do instead of repeating the adjective 'nice' in this sentence?
Mary had a nice house on a nice estate with nice neighbours and nice gardens.