Paper 2: Writing - Writing to Advise - Example
English Language: AQA GCSE, topic 6.3.11
Writing to Advise - Example
Here is an example of advisatory writing. How does the writer use language in this example to advise her friend on fundraising ideas?
Paragraph 1
Dear Katie,
I heard that you were planning on going to Malaysia next summer and needed some fundraising ideas. I had to fundraise for our school trip to New Zealand last year, so I thought you would like some advice.
Paragraph 2
Firstly, you need to make a plan of action. Calculate how much money you will need for absolutely everything – and then add some more, just to be safe! There are lots of ways to plan this out: money tracking apps, Excel spreadsheets, or using a notebook. I used a spreadsheet, which was fantastic because I could set it to add everything up automatically.
Paragraph 3
After you have a budget in place, plan a list of possible fundraising events – the more unusual ones will get you the most money. For my trip, my favourite fundraisers were a sponsored dance-a-thon and shaving my head; both of these helped me to raise huge amounts towards my holiday. If you don’t want a cold head, you could try a sponsored silence, a non-uniform day, or a cake sale. You should ask your head of year for guidance on the rules around these events; they were fantastic when I needed help.
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What techniques are used in this paragraph?
Firstly, you need to make a plan of action. Calculate how much money you will need for absolutely everything – and then add some more, just to be safe!What technique has the writer used to support the advice she is giving?
For my trip, my favourite fundraisers were a sponsored dance-a-thon and shaving my head.What advisatory techniques does the writer use in this extract?
After you have a budget in place, plan a list of possible fundraising events – the more unusual ones will get you the most money.What advisatory techniques does the writer use in this paragraph?
There are lots of ways to plan this out: money tracking apps, Excel spreadsheets, or using a notebook. I used a spreadsheet, which was fantastic because I could set it to add everything up automatically.What advisatory technique has the writer used to support the advice she is giving?
If you don’t want a cold head, you could try a sponsored silence, a non-uniform day, or a cake sale.