Lola, Robbie & Cecilia as Victims
English Lit: AQA A Level Atonement - Specification B, topic 7.4.1
Victims in Atonement - Lola Quincey
Lola is the first victim in the novel. She is presented as a rather lonely and insecure figure in the opening chapters.

Reasons for Lola's insecurity
- Lola has been forced out of her family home because of her parents’ very public divorce.
- She is now in the care of an aunt (Emily) who has little time for her.

Lola's life stage
- At 15 years old, Lola is caught between childhood and adulthood: she tries to be a protective parent figure for her two younger siblings, Jackson and Pierrot, who are both deeply affected by their parents’ divorce but she is not yet on a par with Emily’s older children, Leon and Cecilia. Instead, she has to socialise with the younger children, the 13-year-old Briony and the even younger twins.
- Marshall exploits Lola’s vulnerability and her desire to be treated as a grown-up, offering Lola the attention from an adult that she longs for.

Lola's trauma from the assault
- Lola endures trauma during and following the sexual assault upon her.
- The description of her “hugging herself and rocking” (p165) after being discovered by Briony suggests she is deeply shaken.

Briony naming Lola a criminal
- However, McEwan also creates some ambiguity over her status as victim.
- In Part Four, the older Briony names Lola first in a list of those who had committed a crime (“There was our crime – Lola’s, Marshalls, mine” p369) and, at the very least, Lola’s silence over the identity of her attacker condemns Robbie to prison.

Lola's almost confession
- McEwan provides us with a tantalising moment when it looks like Lola may reveal the truth and perhaps admit some complicity in the act (“she may have been about to embark upon a long confession” p166) but Briony cuts her off.
- At the end of the novel, Briony sees her as resembling the cartoon villain, “Cruella de Vil”.
Victims in Atonement - Robbie and Cecilia
Robbie is the victim that the novel focuses on most. Cecilia is another victim in the novel.

Robbie - victim of class divisions
- Robbie can be seen as a victim of the strict class divisions and “snobbery” (p209) in English society. The Tallises and Paul Marshall are more than willing to close ranks against him.
- In this reading, Robbie is punished for his use of an obscenity frowned upon in upper-middle-class society and for having sexual contact with someone above his station.
- He can also be seen as the victim of Briony’s childish infatuation with him.

Robbie - victim of war
- Robbie is also the victim of war. He is mortally wounded by the shrapnel in his side and he is haunted by the horrors of what he has seen.
- You should consider whether Briony presents us with an idealised version of Robbie, particularly in Part Two of the novel where he is a quietly heroic figure – brave, sensitive and a leader to those around him. Is Briony’s portrayal of him an act of atonement from her, a subtle rewriting of history as a means of assuaging her feelings of guilt?

Cecilia as victim
- Cecilia is another victim in the novel.
- She has to endure a forced separation from Robbie.
- She cuts off all contact with her own family.
- Briony imagines the physical effects of the whole ordeal on her when she describes Cecilia’s eyes as betraying a sense of “fatigue” or “sorrow” (p322) before she provides the shattering revelation that she and Robbie died within months of each other.
Test yourself on Lola, Robbie & Cecilia as Victims
How does Briony describe Lola when she finds her after the assault?
In what ways is Cecilia a victim in Atonement?
Who is NOT a victim in Atonement?