Building Cohesion in Writing

English Language: KS3, topic 3.3.1

Building Cohesion in Writing

The reader can process a written discussion better if you create a cohesive piece of writing. A cohesive piece of writing can be easily followed.

Whole text cohesion

Whole text cohesion

  • There are some simple signposts that we can use to control the way the reader reads our discussion.
  • When presenting points in a discussion for non-fiction writing, we can separate them by saying ‘firstly’, then ‘secondly’, then ‘thirdly’, then ‘finally’.
  • ‘Firstly’, then ‘secondly’, then ‘thirdly’, then ‘finally’ should be the point where you introduce a new paragraph.
Paragraph cohesion

Paragraph cohesion

  • You can still signpost a slight or substantial change in direction within a paragraph.
  • Words like ‘however’, ‘although’ or ‘nevertheless’ can suggest that there’s an alternative to the point just discussed.
  • Words like ‘then’ and ‘when’ suggest the next stage of your argument.
Sentence cohesion

Sentence cohesion

  • Subordinating conjunctions can be used to build cohesion in writing.
  • Subordinating conjunctions help link a main clause to a subordinate clause.
  • Subordinating conjunctions can also provide key information about the link.
  • 'However', 'then', 'because' and 'if' are examples of subordinating conjunctions.

Building Cohesion in Argumentative Writing

The reader can process a written discussion better if you create a cohesive piece of writing. A cohesive piece of writing can be easily followed.

Argumentative writing

Argumentative writing

  • Indications of contrast are very effective in argumentative writing.
  • Words like 'however', 'although' and 'nonetheless' are indications of contrast.
Indications of contrast example

Indications of contrast example

  • ‘I see your point about mobile phones allowing you to access information in class, however, the amount of distraction they cause makes them a bad thing for a classroom environment.’
  • The word 'however' introduces a contrast to the main clause and signposts the reader that there’s an alternative point of view.

Test yourself on Building Cohesion in Writing

  • Which of the words in this sentence is an indication of contrast?

    'I love that jumper however it only comes in one size.'

  • Which of the words in this sentence is an indication of contrast?

    'I didn't think the task was going to be easy. Nonetheless, we went ahead and completed it.'

  • Which words are indications of contrast?

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